tanka 3

click-clack-click metalled
stick on stick, skrrr! sharp blades slide
puck skims over ice
tangled bodies thrash and clump
puck flies, hits net; winning score
© Freya Pickard 2015
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7 Comments on “tanka 3”

  1. Francina Says:

    great Tanka, I do like the flow in this one.

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