tanka 11

solitary oak
lets loose its acorn-bullets
clang-bang on car roof
autumn season’s last firing
as leaves kindle, burn to ash
© Freya Pickard 2015
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6 Comments on “tanka 11”

  1. Libby Says:

    Lovely Freya, so descriptive.


  2. Nice tanka. Can almost visualize the acorns falling from the oak .


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