Universal Law

gold
leafed tree;
metallic
autumn showers
fall
eyes
glowing,
candle-lit
pumpkin grimaces
smile
dark
moon smiles
sheds silver
light, promise of
hope
hazed
dry land…
barren fields…
moist from midnight’s
fog
mist
rises,
reveals
growing green shoots;
spring
doe
grazes
unaware
hunter pinpoints
sight
one
dies, one
lives; this – the
universal
law
four
seasons
-eternal-
universal
law
© lantune sequence Freya Pickard & Patricia Spork 2016
I present another collaboration between myself and my good friend, Patricia Spork. This lantune sequence was written between us as a way of encouraging me to write about what I have been through with both my cancer and death in my immediate family. You can read our first collaboration over at Pure Haiku at Parasitic Predator
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6 Comments on “Universal Law”


  1. Lovely poem, seamless collaboration.


  2. Power in so few words. Well done.

  3. Libby Says:

    Beautifully flowing, great collaboration.


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