Butterfly Cinquain 2

flight paths never
meet in the sunlit air,
gnat, lacewing, bee and bluebottle
dart and land, drink briefly, then launch
themselves into the gold
kissed spring breezes;
butterfly cinquain © Freya Pickard 2016
Explore posts in the same categories: butterfly cinquain

Tags: , , , , , , , , , , , ,

You can comment below, or link to this permanent URL from your own site.

10 Comments on “Butterfly Cinquain 2”

  1. julespaige Says:

    I can see this as the insects in my yard are very good at avoiding the same air space 🙂

  2. merrildsmith Says:

    Such lovely images in this poem! I like picturing the various creatures hovering, but never meeting. “Gold kissed spring breezes”–beautiful!

  3. BroadBlogs Says:

    That’s lovely!

  4. Such a lovely, vivid picture, full of movement and light.

thank you for reading! if you enjoyed this post, please feel free to reblog, like or comment...

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: