Butterfly Cinquain 3

high above me,
two sets of outstretched wings,
brown feathers transparent, sunlit –
quick flap
and they attain updraft, soaring
in circles above each
other – calling;
butterfly cinquain © Freya Pickard 2016
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8 Comments on “Butterfly Cinquain 3”

  1. final line was surprise!

  2. I can imagine the scene unfolding above you! Great descriptors here!

  3. Libby Says:

    Beautifully described. I see them here too.

  4. merrildsmith Says:

    I love this one! The rhythm and the image in my head go together–I can picture this scene so vividly.

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