Freefall – verses 1 – 3

Here are the first three verses of my Freyan Verse, Freefall. I’ve put the colours in so you can see where each stanza ends and begins. How would you finish this verse?
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6 Comments on “Freefall – verses 1 – 3”

  1. julespaige Says:

    The color division is a bonus.
    I’m not sure about beginnings or endings because perspective always plays a role in what we write.

    The whole thing has a Sci-fi feel. It is very cold in space… And I think of the moon and how earth might look from it…

  2. Your works are true gems.

  3. Beautiful Freya, Just lovely

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