Breathe

Breathe

If you are one of my supporters at Patreon, you will have been treated to some poetry from my unpublished poetry & prose collection about Arturina. This is the first Freyan Verse that I’ve written about her – what do you think? I am still working on this collection; I know the story now, it’s just putting together all the poetry and prose fragments so that they make sense to the reader! Have a go at your own Freyan Verse if you like!
I’ve started making some videos about my writing! Please check them out at YouTube
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5 Comments on “Breathe”

  1. Frank Says:

    A lovely verse. I do wonder if maybe that first one would read slightly better as:

    metal
    womb-encased
    travels
    from violence
    to vastness
    of space…
    freedom

    if only because “spatial freedom” means the geometric freedom to move in any direction; whereas “space” is more poetic and conjures up the infinite…

  2. Christy B Says:

    Arturia gets her own verse ~ Well done!


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