silver budded branch
rises moon-kissed; golden rain
descends from sun’s tears
metallic gleams winter’s end
before the surge of Spring hues
© Freya Pickard 2015
tanka 4
clippings, freya pickard, gold, metallic, moon, rain, short form poetry, short verse, silver, spring, sun, tanka, tears, winter
Responses to “tanka 4”
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The rain and tears always bring me yo a somber placr. Your words were besutiful. How did your scan go? You were in my prayers a week or so ago. Sorry I do lose track of time. . .♡
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I know what you mean by a sombre place… but both rain and tears can be releasing. the scan went fine thanks – just waiting now for a meeting date with the consultant to get the results… thank you so much for your prayers!
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Powerul images, dear Freya!. Beautifully penned… All my best wishes. Aquileana ⭐
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v pleased you find powerful images in my poetry Aquileana!
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This is so beautiful!
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thank you for reading, Broad Blogs
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A lovely poem, Freya. 🙂
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thank you for reading, Celestine!
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