Freefall – verse 1

Here is the first verse of my Freyan Verse, Freefall. It looks a bit different from the usual Freyan Verse doesn’t it? Over the next couple of weeks I will build you a picture of how I construct this form of poetry. Why don’t you give it a go yourself?
For a full explanation about this poetical form that I have invented, please visit Freyan Verse.
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Responses to “Freefall – verse 1”

  1. Sharmishtha Basu Avatar

    They are exquisite

    1. dragonscaleclippings Avatar

      🙂

  2. Frank Avatar

    I love the shape of this, as well as the sense.

    1. dragonscaleclippings Avatar

      thank you, Frank! the shape was coincidental! xxx

  3. Libby Avatar

    Interesting!

    1. dragonscaleclippings Avatar

      oh good! I’ll post verses 1-3 next week so you can see how it “grows”! xxx

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